All Comments on 'Living Life with Faith Ch. 01'

A excellent start and you did a really good job if in flushing out the setting. I'll be looking froward to reading more

If this is your 1st story make it your last

A good start. I like the 3 POVs trick (him, her, external). I want a bit more background. Why one class? Why Arabic? Why does he hate cold so much? Etc.

Put in lots of feelings. It's erotica hey?

Looking fwd to ch 2

and , as we all do, if a cretin does not leave a Nome DE plume, so you can check them out, ignore the comments, for they are cowards

Looking forward to see where you take this story to.