All Comments on 'Jessy Trains Jake Ch. 01'

Good theme. Punctuation is atrocious. Use spell check.

More please about how she got him to submit..

i realy wanted to read this but after he changed his name a few times i just couldnt go on..

You aren't allowed to cum again until you learn how to spell.

Needs editing and spell correction. Jake masturbates, not masterbates for example.

But the story line is good and could easily be expanded as Jessie finds new ways to feed their mutual desire for the pleasures of perversion.

This could be a very good series so keep it going--and cumming.

interesthing

next time plz keep on going with breaks like start stop start stop wait ..........

And the premise that she could train a teenage boy to cum on command is simply ludicrous.

Please add another chapter.