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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/24/13

the stupid leading the dumb

it wasnt may fault i just let him

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by Anonymous02/24/13

how low

can a complete generation fall, where sex , love, emotions ...have absoultly no value anymore? how hot is that ? why don't you fuck your vacuum cleaner instead.

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by Anonymous02/25/13

Good story

Nicely done. To hell with the critics.

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by joelafayette02/26/13

Short and sweet

Thanks.

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by angelx60202/28/13

Very hot.

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by Pirette03/05/13

Great story

I thoroughly enjoyed tfe story, but the climax, sorry ending seemed a little abrupt, to me... A minor issue that didn't ruin it for me.

Please keep writing!

~P

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by lit_firezone01/13/14

What happened between 'i will not be prize' and 'I don't remember agreeing'. sort of a plot skip there. I also found the ending a little sudden.

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by Anonymous03/17/15

What a great story

Told this story so beautifully well done, I'm already looking forward to the next scribing.
Thank you

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by Anonymous05/15/16

I truly liked it from heart.

Hope I also get such a chance with such beautiful girls... I wish....

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