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the stupid leading the dumb
it wasnt may fault i just let him
how low
can a complete generation fall, where sex , love, emotions ...have absoultly no value anymore? how hot is that ? why don't you fuck your vacuum cleaner instead.
Good story
Nicely done. To hell with the critics.
Short and sweet
Thanks.
Very hot.
Great story
I thoroughly enjoyed tfe story, but the climax, sorry ending seemed a little abrupt, to me... A minor issue that didn't ruin it for me.
Please keep writing!
~P
What happened between 'i will not be prize' and 'I don't remember agreeing'. sort of a plot skip there. I also found the ending a little sudden.
What a great story
Told this story so beautifully well done, I'm already looking forward to the next scribing.
Thank you
I truly liked it from heart.
Hope I also get such a chance with such beautiful girls... I wish....
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