Tears of the Fallen Ch. 04

Longer, More, Longer, More,Longer,More, Longer, More...

I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but I gobbled up that chapter way fast. Lots of intense feelings. Please make them longer the next time. This was a snack. And I'm voracious for your chapters.

Impatiently waiting!

I love your stories but waiting for a new chapter isn't fun. PLEASE hurry with getting them submitted or at least make the chapters a tad longer??
Really interested in Pietro and Cassia's story, his vulnerability is sweet and more endearing than anything.

Another demanding reader ;D

Please write more! I really love your stories. You have created a whole new world in my mind! I am grateful for that, but so annoyingly dependent on more!

Don't leave out Elina please!!

Oh jaz! u do it every time! Yay! Love the freya - reesa twist. Would luv even more if you gave an in depth storyline to elina. Please dont gloss over her! Her character is a mystery and it would be fabulous if she was a true force to be reckoned with; and at the same a sensuous woman finding a partner who is worthy of her strength and vulnerabilities!!!

Trying to work it out.

So far this is what I've come up with. Reasa got stripped of vampire side to know what it is like to be so vulnerable again. Then when or if she accepts that liam is her mate, his bite will make her were despite the fact he is hybrid, forcing her to understand were life. Then once she understands that annie will return her vampire side, making her the one thing she hates the most what she calls an abomination. I AM SOOOO LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING IF MY THEoRY IS CORRECT!

Re: don't leave Elina out

I suggest you go back and reread hearts of warriors. Elina already has a mate, she just doesn't know it yet. Or she won't accept it, either way he knows she is his. He is simply wating for her.

Second Anon's comment about Elina

Karn is her mate but he is as hesitant as she is. I am so proud of Freya and yes they are the perfect couple to help Reasa, even though I agree with both women but what Annie did as Queen was I think an even harsher punishment than death but oh yes the irony if she comes to accept Liam and then gets turned lol Onwards to read more

Isnt Elina's mate Karn?

Well that is how it has seemed to me from past chapters.
The only one without a mate is Kallum i think

So in love with Freya...

My all time favorite character in this series ever since she was first introduced!! I really hope to read more about her!

Just noticed something

There are no black, Asian, or Spanish people in this entire series. I find that kind of odd.

Bravo!

I love getting back to the basics and reading dialogue between Dayton and Freya :)

dear anonymous one comment down

What has spanish or black or italian got to do with this story..its a wonderful piece of art that I daresay I enjoy more than most.. Just enjoy the story and by the way thereasa is described as having a caramel skin tone which rules out her being white..

hold on one minute....................

this may be a mute point here.......but remember that they now have her gun with pure poison in the bullets.....why are they not anglicizing the pure stuff.....instead of the degraded or diluted stuff........... it took me this long to figure out this is not right that they now have a pure sample to work with....................Just a question.........

in my opinion...

...as a male who has had to deal with dangerous real life situations. The best way to have convinced Freya to accept Theressa as a boarder.

Would be to keep the woman assassin situated where she could be continuously monitored and controlled by the powerful and experienced and ravening paranoid vampire, Freya.

And I agree with the question about the weapon, the cartridges of poison and all the other gear Theressa had.

odd?? what's odd....?

I agree with anonymous below that we should just enjoy the story....who cares that there is an absence of the other races....? Plus Asian and Spanish mythology has no vampires or were...they have their own cultures of Gods and ghosts and spirits...so to the anonymous who wondered about it - write your own story if that bothers you too much.

To the Anon who questioned about races and such....

*lil quirk of grin*
Have you not been paying any attention? Pietro is of Spanish origins. And if you pay attention to Reasa's description, you would realize that the caramel skinned assassin from Europe is definitely not a white girl.... Just sayin'.

I've read this one and the 2 before this and I am loving it. I do hope this is not the last story line in this amazing FTI series. Just so you know its fetal position ....you and the editors have made this mistake a bunch of times in your stories and I had to point it out to you.