Pretty Lily Ch. 02

amazing!

This story is great! Please continue writing. Iv never gotten so excited in all my life by reading a story this good. I love how he goes from sweet to dominate in a blink of an eye.

There have been other girls, she never gets to go home, but he's not going to keep her forever... can already seen this turning into one of those lameass "training you for your master" BDSM stories. I'll reserve judgment and scoring until a later chapter when I find out whether this is actually in the wrong category or if its a yet another lame attempt by an author to cross over BDSM into non-con. The sex is hot, the borderline "yes master" bullshit is not.

CHOICE

It is wrong to steal another persons future, their life. If one chooses to be a slave or craves BDSM then bravo for them and for their Master. But to steal their life is not erotic, it is evil.

Don't worry

I have plans and ideas for this series. It's not in the wrong category, but I can't give away story just yet! Please be patient with me as it may take a few chapters to fully grasp what I am getting at, but I can assure you it's in the right place and you'll love it. :)

Not sure

Not sure about this story. It is wrong to take a person and turn them into a slave. I'm going to wait and see what you do with the next chapter but I think this should be in a different catogory.

Promising !

Can't wait for more !

hmm. No continuation?

I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter. Pretty entertaining.