Being Australian, mostly in SA, I enjoy your stories very much.
The "yeah, right" comment tells me that you also listen to ABC NewsRadio - I would love to find that Kel Richards' piece!
how the bank would sell it to Parsons when the Woods clan owns the bank. Given their history, I would suspect Edward would have been informed and increased his own low bid. Apart of that, entertaining story. The ending feels a bit rushed and could have been a bit more fleshed out, but still very good.
You certainly do good research for your stories. That makes all the difference. I got confused at the conversation about the painting of the grandparents. You might re-read that sometime and see what I mean. Good story as always.
Thanks for a wonderful story. Please keep up the good work. You are one of the authors that I follow! Love you bunches. alaskadude
Stilted schoolboy writing.
I notice you did not sign your name,
we cannot see what submissions -if any- you have made
I suggest you go investigate the number of highly ranked this author has written for us to read - Free!
your comment is petty and totally with any redeemable merit.
I dare say that might also be a personal self description
If you are a troll go find another bridge, I hear Russia and China have some openings
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