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This is a really intriguing story
especially for one posted in the Romance genre. I really happy to see where it goes!
Thank you for writing!
Interesting that in the future...
...stereotypes are thriving. The Asian girl sews and the Hispanic girl gardens. i'm relieved there wasn't a black girl.
to be honest
truthfully, those two characters are based off of real people i know. actually, pretty much all the girls save Lacie are. and i kept as true to their personalities and hobbies as i could. it's easier to write about a character if they already have their own personality before you put them on a page. Tara and Marie are real friends of mine, (names changed to protect identities) and those are their honest-to-God hobbies. some stereotypes have base in truth i guess.
I am glad...
I am glad you took the time to respond to that unnamed critic.
It bothers me when people leave messages while hiding their names, but it really pisses me off when those unnamed people on the site make smart ass comments that are in no way meant to be helpful. I believe that writers post wanting to share something that they enjoyed writing and reading themselves. If it isn't something that a member of an audience likes, they have the option to click on and leave it at that. If something doesn't appeal to me, I simply give it a low star rating and move on. There is a reader for every story, so discouraging writers is petty and annoying in general.
That's all I have to say about that...Lmbo
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