All Comments on 'The Boss and His PA'

by davidbarclay68

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J6480J6480about 11 years ago

Good stuff & well written, hope there's more to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good start

great start looking forward to the remainder of the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Legs

I also love legs, your attention to detail is excellent, cant wait for the rest, i hope Anne enjoys herself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
as a sub myself

I was moved greatly by your story Sir David and wish to read more.

HarleyFatboy1HarleyFatboy1about 11 years ago
A fabulous fantasy

David Barclay

Your story is like reading the male version of my series, A Woman's Journal, which should let you know that I am a fan.

I would love you to share how you felt emotionally as you told Anne what to do and watched her comply. It would add a level of depth that I rarely find with male authors of erotica.

You must continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!

I love it. I think you should write more maybe start chapters its turned me on a lot! I wish my boss was like this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
OMG

OMG - MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Boss and His PA

What a fortunate hire i do say... can not wait for the rest of the story!!!

From a stockings and legs admirer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

A very nice start - I hope to see many more parts.

boraddaboraddaabout 10 years ago
Good Starter for One

Nice of Anne to wear Stockings and Suspenders and nice sexy

Bras and Panties

My wife wears all these plus short skirts and blouses to please

Now looking forward to Part 2

blondechristine2012blondechristine2012almost 9 years ago
What a load of bollocks

The writer of this so does not understand women as to be untrue.

Shame really as it was nicely written.

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