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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Who's on first?

You need to go back and see who is talking....and when.

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 11 years ago
After you straighten out your dialog, you can also take a shot at proof-reading a story before you post it.

"Amber! Okay so I'm so excited to see popular movie with cute guy in it with you tonight! I know I'm early but I figured we could go get something to eat first! Are you ready?! ...k stupid question. You're not going out in that."

Sentences that make at least enough sense to figure out what you'd meant to say? Proper spelling? Proper grammar? Proper punctuation? SO many mistakes to point out, I honestly wouldn't know where to begin. Horrible attempt. Just horrible.

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