Time for some CBT for Paul. And what started as a BDSM game became rape when she said no. Wish you had found a different direction for it as I was enjoying it until then.
First off, this is assault, battery and rape - not bdsm. And secondly, he can't really think he's going to bluff his way through this? Stella is going to see to it that Becky knows exactly what he did and then the Police are going to know. He'll be lucky to stay out of jail. That said, it was an original story.
This is the type of story that happens when a writer doesn't know the difference between bondage play and rape. While the "wrong twin" premise has been used before to great effect by the late, sorely missed, Colleen Thomas, this story is a fine example of that premise poorly executed.
as soon as he saw the tat was gone and knew it wasnt his girlfriend and did it anyway he crossed the line.yes she may have actively went with it in the end only means she gave in, but he still knew better. unless the two girls dont mind sharing he should be kicked in the nuts on the way out the door.
English
Cute
My kind of BDSM. Soft and caring (to a point).
what a chucklehead
Time for some CBT for Paul. And what started as a BDSM game became rape when she said no. Wish you had found a different direction for it as I was enjoying it until then.
Wrong Category
Rape is not BDSM; it is nonsent/reluctance.
He can't be THAT dumb, can he?
First off, this is assault, battery and rape - not bdsm. And secondly, he can't really think he's going to bluff his way through this? Stella is going to see to it that Becky knows exactly what he did and then the Police are going to know. He'll be lucky to stay out of jail. That said, it was an original story.
Poor execution
This is the type of story that happens when a writer doesn't know the difference between bondage play and rape. While the "wrong twin" premise has been used before to great effect by the late, sorely missed, Colleen Thomas, this story is a fine example of that premise poorly executed.
caring to a point. where?
as soon as he saw the tat was gone and knew it wasnt his girlfriend and did it anyway he crossed the line.yes she may have actively went with it in the end only means she gave in, but he still knew better. unless the two girls dont mind sharing he should be kicked in the nuts on the way out the door.
Nice twist.
I am really enjoying your writing. Thank you.
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