All Comments on 'Eighteen Today'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
name change

U said his name was peter, then it was paul, then it was peter again...

ErotonautErotonautalmost 11 years ago

Erica is hardly a wide-eyed innocent: barely has she lost her virginity to Peter than she's contemplating turning tricks, maybe even asking him to pimp for her. Looks like he sowed his seed and is about to reap the whirlwind.

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
Where oh where?

Was she when I was young and horny?

Darn enticing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Something seems wrong

This story reflects both the man and birthday girl violated the law in the old adage of prostitution and had that been noted, I would have enjoyed the story for what it is; yet it seems to be lacking in something.

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