Helen and Jim Vol. 03

Yay, the story continues!

I'm really happy you added another chapter this story; I like both of the characters, and it's nice to see their adventure continue. Keep up the good work! :)

Very good

I like this story very much, its well written and you just want to know how it continues.
So thumbs up and write on :p

more chapters needed, story could have

Does Jim get told by Helen that Jim met her at a TS club, not a straight club? As for the next chapters, you could have a 3 way with Angel. And Jim's 30 the birthday is soon, so there could be a big night for him being thrown a party by Helen at her house with both of their TS and straight friends there. And if he goes back to the club, the red headed twins will try to get him, so that might lead to a cat fight. And will Helen and Jim move in together into her house since he can cook in her big kitchen and she does not. The story based on only two days is too short to end with this couple.

Holy shit hes back; now everybody stay nice and calm, we don't want to scare him away...

LOL!

Anonymous, I had to laugh out loud when I read your comment about scaring me off! I'm sorry I'm such a slow author, it's just that there are so many things that suck my writing time away. But thank you for the laugh, your sarcasm at least let's me know I'm missed!

amazing

Really good!

A bloody good love-story

This is the nearest I have ever read to a love-story. Please write some more about this couple.

LOVE IT

Your are missed and hope you hive us more of this lovely couple soon ....I'TS TURNING IN TO ONE OF THE BEST LOVE STORIES I READ THAT HAS SON EROTICA IN IT...SO KEEP WRITING AND READ YOU SOON

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.......what a sensual love story.....all three if them....HOT HOT HOT HOT....wonder if I changed my name to Jim if I could find a Helen?

excellent

One of the best I've read here.

Total crap

Ridiculous to boot.

A Truly Wonderful Surprise...

...Of a story that started out a little confusing, but became incredible by its last chapter (Vol. 03). I love the romantic storyline that eventually evolved, how could any woman not cry along with her when Helen reveals her own vulnerabilities, and they both end up falling in love with who they each actually are, not with what they were supposed to be. Fabulous writing that brought that emotional love scene to life. Thanks for sharing a really great read, but you wrote the last chapter back in february 2013... perhumps its time for an update on these two? PLEASE!

Love this series

I finished the series this morning. It is sexy, romantic, and realistic. I would love another chapter. Perhaps a wedding.

GREAT STORY

I LOVE YOUR STORIES,I SURE HOPE YOU WILL WRIGHT ANOTHER CHAPTER TO THIS.

Really good

I love this story, I hope you can add more chapters soon. There is so much you can do with the characters, ie: meet the parents, angel meets Jim, marriage, kids ect. You are a talented writer keep it up.

Oh wow....sooooo hott, love how they are falling for each other....gets my motor going big time

Please more!!!

More

We need more of jim and helen

Love it!

Great story! I love it when he willingly kneels before her and sucks her fabulous cock!
Hope for more about these two.

More!

Please - we neeeeeed more of this :)

Thanx

Got me going. Love the romance, regardless of genitalia.
Please....give us more

Incredible!

Now that's a story in which I never expected to see a reference to The Searchers. Amazing. I need a woman like Helen.

Superb dans lovely

I really love this romance. Bravo. I hope you have more episodes in store for us