A Reasonable Accommodation

Obvious ending

From the beginning of the story, you projected what the ending would be. There was no real surprise there.

two sets of cheaters

both couples are worthless. They all deserve each other and have no right or reason to get angry with the other. Just hope the kids are more intelligent than their parents which are worthless.

Weirdly entertaining

Call me a hypocrite, but I find a cheating story told from a man's point of view a lot more palatable than one told from a woman's POV. I thought some of the encounters were pretty hot. I also found the whole thing kind of absurd, and the interludes between the action frequently strangely clinical. The ending has a good for the goose/gander thing going on for it. The narrator has a somewhat sardonic attitude that I found amusing. I liked it.

you forgot that

their moral compass combined with their average .........wherever is completly fucked up and will end in a average divorce with a lot of sad average kids.

the story is not average and not erotic it under average dumb and does not even get an average vote.

I feel terrible for the kids. It's not so much the fucking around as the deception and betrayal. Who really gives a shit about these no adults with NO morals. The kids are the ones who will be fucked once it all comes out in the open and it will. It ALWAYS comes ou eventually.

Forecast

Turns out Sweetie2, while at the parent-teacher meeting with Hubby1, made an accurate forecast of the future (twice!) We can only hope that the 'recreational sex only' aspect of the H1S2 pairing is ALSO being observed in the H2S1 pairing...but if I had to guess, I would guess - NOT! So someones (sic) will suffer a bit more than otherones (sic2). Maybe a bigger house with a mother-in law suite and a REALLY big Master Bedroom! (pun on 'accommodation' intended!)

Wish I had H2S1s frequent flier miles!

5*

The ending was telegraphed a bit

but it was still done nicely and well-written.

Tit For Tat

will eventually fry each couple in the fat! I've watched it happen.

When did the other spouses have time to get together?

I doubt that their business travels were ever to the same location.

Ah yes -

Cheating is not an innocent or solo sport -

You are unlikely to find 4 people who accidentally hook up and stay happy with people they cannot trust - regardless of how "innocent" they think the sex is - it is the minor part of the issue - everyone is a liar and a cheat - that does not bode well for them - too bad -

Seems they might have had a chance of doing it openly and working out a true accommodation -

The old goose and gander scenario

Someday, someone will probably come up with a reasonable explanation for people that believe it's okay to cheat on your spouse to "get even"? Except I don't think this is one of those cases. Until the very end, I don't think that all four adults knew they were sleeping with one anothers spouses. I think they were just cheating in their own little universe. A little "dry" in the telling. But otherwise an okay story.

Well that wasn't surprising

But it begged the question - How long had it been going on? Or does it cast their relationship in a new light? Or is this about to become a foursome? My only complaint was the story was sort of boring. I never felt that Blair and Cheryl had any real "fire" between them. Why cheat on your spouse if you're not fired up about it? Meh.

IT WAS JUST A MATTER OF TIME

space and opportunity to prevail. TK U MLJ LV NV

This story REALLY held my interest.

Yes, the ending was probably the most predictable of the possibilities, but the journey made that okay.

No One Got Hurt

Usually I look forward to the hurt and the revenge. I enjoyed your story very much as is, though. I liked that the essentially selfish characters found events so "reasonable".

No Feeling

If life was only that shallow and that simple.

Umm..... where's the rest?

hey where is the rest of the story, is there going to be another chapter, hopefully there will be a part 2 to finish it, now just wish I could have as much sex as they all seem to be getting, PS just reading sum of the comments by others, an I've been thinking, well how does the swinging community keep going and/or getting bigger, in regards to the story characters, now that Blair has gotten evidence it's now just a short step into the swinging lifestyle, well it seems like it to me that is.

While I hate cheaters

This was entertaining.

Blink Blink

Blink Blink.

Wow...you made sex boring. Kudos. Amusing but so frothy that there was no substance.

Hum!

Another story to be filed in Lits unofficial "Unfinished Story" category.