Yes I did. But I botched that up and wanted to do it as one whole story. I left notes to the Lit. staff to publish this and remove the others. I haven't had time to check on that yet. I I will straightaway.
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Anonymous02/28/13
While I appreciate
While I appreciate having the entire story in one fell swoop; is there any chance of a sequel?
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Anonymous02/28/13
ONCE AGAIN..TOTAL FAMILY BI...OMITTED..! ! !
YOU RE-POSTED ..BUT ONCE AGAIN OMITTED..WHAT SEX CHARGED MOMS/WOMEN LIKE MYSELF TURN ON TO..TOTAL FAMILY BI..MEANING HOT BI ACTION BETWEEN DADS AND SONS..ALSO.. WITH MOM AS PART OF IT..NOTHING HOTTER FOR US..THEN WATCHING STUD SON(S) AND THEIR DAD GETTING INTO TOTAL STUD BI ACTION WITH MOM RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE. ESPECIALLY MOM GETTING HER GUYS' CREMEPIES FROM EVERYWHERE....NOTHING MAKES US WETTER AND IN MANY INSTANCES.. "SQUIRT"....YOU SEEM TO HAVE NO TROUBLE TELLING US THAT JOHN AND KEVIN BOTH TURN ONTO THEIR OWN CREMEPIES..JOHN OTHER STUDS TOO..ETC. LOVE FEELING THEIR COCKS RUBBING AGAINST EACH OTHER IN DP'ING...BUT AGAIN..SAME-OLD..SAME-OLD. ACTUAL .HOT MALE BI OMITTED..TRUST MOMS.. LIKE MYSELF..TOTAL BI FAMILY FUN IS WHERE IT IS AT...AND FOR ALL THE NAY SAYERS.. ADMIT IT..IT IS HOTTTTTTTTTTTT....AND ABOUT TIME YOU REMENBER THAT MOMS AND WOMEN READ THESE POSTS..NOT JUST UP-TIGHT MALES..
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Anonymous03/01/13
Your story
Your story is to dam long for one reading, it needed to have been done over several days. Only read the first two chapters then moved on to another story.
Congratulations that was amazing. You had a nice set up, interesting story arc and explosive finish that left scope for a sequel. Well done, great read.
Thanks for your comment, Englishvoyeur. To the negative annonymous commenters, first, I write whole, integrated stories, not vignettes. Grab your lotion and use your imagination for that. Second to the person who wants bi-sex with men, don't read my writings, you will never see it in them. I'm a heterosexual male, women turn me on, not men. Finally, I've been getting a lot of requests for a sequel. I have this year pretty well planned out so if I do a sequel it will be a long time coming. Sorry.
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Anonymous03/02/13
MORE
When does Michelles friend and her family get into the story???
Normally I dont read the long stories on here, after awhile I go to a different story, but this one, I would get to the bottom of the page thinking I was done, and it kept saying I had more pages, so I kept reading, I'm always busy, so any spare time im like, I gotta finish this story lol, I know I'm almost done, it took me a long time to finish, , but it was at a perfect pace to keep me wanting to read, I love to read, so the length didnt bother me. I dont know how long youve been writing, buy I took think wroth practice you would be really great. Good read
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Anonymous05/17/13
grat story
looking forward to hear more about your incest family .. yes it was a long story but a grat one just loved it from start to finsh looking to next story love leann xxxxxxx
Dear, gentle reader. I make the following comment with all due respect. You have commented on a couple of my stories favorably and you have always said "grat" story. I think, however, that you mean "great" story. I hope that I have not offended you with this criticism. It is offered with, as I said above, all due respect.
you are excilent , your story is too large, but pleasurable, try to short, n dont accept outsider like friends etc, rather you allow son and daughter inlaw and her parents, daughter and her husbend and her parents and more kids, or mother and daughter can be pregnent by son and dad, and they have kids , after few year those kids fucking withh parents...
became just more and more of the same thing over and over again to the point of way too much to be enjoyable. A perfect example of where less would have been more.
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Anonymous10/24/13
3Continue
Okay. You have set them up for visit to the orgy. Write another story about that. And, include Michelle's girlfriend, brother and mother.
So that's where you draw the line... Father & Son??
You celebrate every other manner of sexual perversion (except with the family Beagle) but can't bring yourself to write about men in an incestuous bi-sexual relationship.
Take some chances... have the courage to explore... write outside your comfort zone... unless you consider this version of "Parental Discretion" your best effort.
In that case, you aimed too low and hit your mark!
One of the best stories I've read on this site. It has it all (almost): mommy/son, daddy/daughter and mommy/daughter. I'm glad it doesn't have dad/son. Not my thing. Even though it's very long, I've read much shorter stories that have taken me longer to read than this (if that makes any sense). A true 5 star story!!
Great story!! So many stories has mom cheating on dad one way or the other. It is so goo to hve a whole family loving eah other.
Like I said great story.
What an erotic and informed story, i loved the intricate details of how the family merged into a hot incest relationship. Although others obviously don't enjoy the "clean the platter" parts, i did thoroughly enjoy them, nothing better than going down on a woman after i or another guy has cum inside her! Keep up the good work!!!
It took me almost a week to complete the read. My wife does not appreciate my taste in literature, so I was reading it on the sly.
And maintaining an erection throughout!
I'll be back. I need to do some stuff, but I want to real more of your stories.
English
Didn't you already post this story in multple parts in January?
Parental Discretion Is Advised
Yes I did. But I botched that up and wanted to do it as one whole story. I left notes to the Lit. staff to publish this and remove the others. I haven't had time to check on that yet. I I will straightaway.
While I appreciate
While I appreciate having the entire story in one fell swoop; is there any chance of a sequel?
ONCE AGAIN..TOTAL FAMILY BI...OMITTED..! ! !
YOU RE-POSTED ..BUT ONCE AGAIN OMITTED..WHAT SEX CHARGED MOMS/WOMEN LIKE MYSELF TURN ON TO..TOTAL FAMILY BI..MEANING HOT BI ACTION BETWEEN DADS AND SONS..ALSO.. WITH MOM AS PART OF IT..NOTHING HOTTER FOR US..THEN WATCHING STUD SON(S) AND THEIR DAD GETTING INTO TOTAL STUD BI ACTION WITH MOM RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE. ESPECIALLY MOM GETTING HER GUYS' CREMEPIES FROM EVERYWHERE....NOTHING MAKES US WETTER AND IN MANY INSTANCES.. "SQUIRT"....YOU SEEM TO HAVE NO TROUBLE TELLING US THAT JOHN AND KEVIN BOTH TURN ONTO THEIR OWN CREMEPIES..JOHN OTHER STUDS TOO..ETC. LOVE FEELING THEIR COCKS RUBBING AGAINST EACH OTHER IN DP'ING...BUT AGAIN..SAME-OLD..SAME-OLD. ACTUAL .HOT MALE BI OMITTED..TRUST MOMS.. LIKE MYSELF..TOTAL BI FAMILY FUN IS WHERE IT IS AT...AND FOR ALL THE NAY SAYERS.. ADMIT IT..IT IS HOTTTTTTTTTTTT....AND ABOUT TIME YOU REMENBER THAT MOMS AND WOMEN READ THESE POSTS..NOT JUST UP-TIGHT MALES..
Your story
Your story is to dam long for one reading, it needed to have been done over several days. Only read the first two chapters then moved on to another story.
size sometimes is important
Congratulations that was amazing. You had a nice set up, interesting story arc and explosive finish that left scope for a sequel. Well done, great read.
Thank you Englishvoyeur
Thanks for your comment, Englishvoyeur. To the negative annonymous commenters, first, I write whole, integrated stories, not vignettes. Grab your lotion and use your imagination for that. Second to the person who wants bi-sex with men, don't read my writings, you will never see it in them. I'm a heterosexual male, women turn me on, not men. Finally, I've been getting a lot of requests for a sequel. I have this year pretty well planned out so if I do a sequel it will be a long time coming. Sorry.
MORE
When does Michelles friend and her family get into the story???
To Anonymous re: More
Quien sabe? :-)
Normally I dont read the long stories on here, after awhile I go to a different story, but this one, I would get to the bottom of the page thinking I was done, and it kept saying I had more pages, so I kept reading, I'm always busy, so any spare time im like, I gotta finish this story lol, I know I'm almost done, it took me a long time to finish, , but it was at a perfect pace to keep me wanting to read, I love to read, so the length didnt bother me. I dont know how long youve been writing, buy I took think wroth practice you would be really great. Good read
grat story
looking forward to hear more about your incest family .. yes it was a long story but a grat one just loved it from start to finsh looking to next story love leann xxxxxxx
To: Anonymous: Grat Story
Dear, gentle reader. I make the following comment with all due respect. You have commented on a couple of my stories favorably and you have always said "grat" story. I think, however, that you mean "great" story. I hope that I have not offended you with this criticism. It is offered with, as I said above, all due respect.
do and dont do
you are excilent , your story is too large, but pleasurable, try to short, n dont accept outsider like friends etc, rather you allow son and daughter inlaw and her parents, daughter and her husbend and her parents and more kids, or mother and daughter can be pregnent by son and dad, and they have kids , after few year those kids fucking withh parents...
after a while it
became just more and more of the same thing over and over again to the point of way too much to be enjoyable. A perfect example of where less would have been more.
3Continue
Okay. You have set them up for visit to the orgy. Write another story about that. And, include Michelle's girlfriend, brother and mother.
To Anonymous regarding PDIA
It's a strong possibility, just don't know when.
Disappointing
So that's where you draw the line... Father & Son??
You celebrate every other manner of sexual perversion (except with the family Beagle) but can't bring yourself to write about men in an incestuous bi-sexual relationship.
Take some chances... have the courage to explore... write outside your comfort zone... unless you consider this version of "Parental Discretion" your best effort.
In that case, you aimed too low and hit your mark!
totally hot!!!
One of the best stories I've read on this site. It has it all (almost): mommy/son, daddy/daughter and mommy/daughter. I'm glad it doesn't have dad/son. Not my thing. Even though it's very long, I've read much shorter stories that have taken me longer to read than this (if that makes any sense). A true 5 star story!!
To Sex4Lf
Thank you, Sex4Lf, for your kind comment. I'm glad you liked the story.
Best story yet
I have been reading Literotica for over a year and this is the best story i have read on incest. Thank you Eroscott
^__^
Fantastic story indeed. I've spent all day reading your stories and it's been a blast. You rock, Eroscott. Thanks again for the good time, hehe. ;-)
YamiBoy
Thank you, YamiBoy, for your kind comment. I so glad you like my stories. That goes to all of those who like my writing, too.
Great story!! So many stories has mom cheating on dad one way or the other. It is so goo to hve a whole family loving eah other.
Like I said great story.
19 Pages?
19 ..... Pages??
Couldn't break it up?
1 star
Would have given it higher but when you went into lick the platter clean that made me throw up.
loved every moment!!
What an erotic and informed story, i loved the intricate details of how the family merged into a hot incest relationship. Although others obviously don't enjoy the "clean the platter" parts, i did thoroughly enjoy them, nothing better than going down on a woman after i or another guy has cum inside her! Keep up the good work!!!
Thank you bendigoboy for your kind comment.
Great Story
It took me almost a week to complete the read. My wife does not appreciate my taste in literature, so I was reading it on the sly.
And maintaining an erection throughout!
I'll be back. I need to do some stuff, but I want to real more of your stories.
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