Keeper Ch. 08

love it Ardella!

keep it up! this chapter was so hot!!

Brilliant

I know that genius shouldn't be rushed, but can you post the next five chapters tomorrow? Please!?!

Sooooo hot!

Oh my (fanning myself). Well done.

Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. I'm already having withdrawals.

oh my god, that was soo sexy!

:)

sigh......

I just loved it. I think Blue and John are so hot together. This chapter was erotic and sexy and too short.

But, hopefully we won't have to wait as long as Blue will have to wait for John before we see the next chapter?

wonderful

great to see another chapter, wish I could wait till a few are up to read them all at once but I have no will power with your stories. This chapter wonderfully hot!! Nice to think that you've obviously got plenty ahead for us.
Cheers

Yum.

oh wow. So sexy. i want to be John!

Wonderful!

So much for courting...

They're a little past that, don't you think? This chapter was worth waiting for. Thank you.

How's chapter 9 coming? We're going crazy out here :P

re: How's chapter 9 coming?

Ummmmmm... I'm stuck! I admit it.
Please don't go TOO crazy, and I'll work harder on getting it done. I think I'm seeing a faint light at the end of the Ch. 9 tunnel...
;)

She waits, we wait...

Pleeease Ardella, don't make us wait much longer! I come back here every day looking for news on John and Blue...

Still stuck?

I'm thinking lots of steamy phone sex while they're apart. C'mon - help us out here!

i'm dyyyyyyyyiiiiiinngggg

john and blue don't have to wait *this* long!

don't worry. we understand. and will love you no matter how long we have to wait.

buutttttttt...

Ardella?

What happened to Infiltration? I wanted to read it again but it vanished. Are you publishing it? Finally? :)

The best story on this site!

Ardella, please tell us that "The Infiltration" can be found elsewhere? Like Anonymous, I was getting antsy to read it again.

MH

Such passion!

I am so glad I came across your story! Delectable!

Patience

I was wondering if you had a ballpark estimate on when chapter 9 will be up. Your story is so good but I feel pathetic checking every day!

Still blocked?

You answered that the next instalment was on track for mid-June but that's gone now. Are you still stuck? This story is too good to abandon!

Please.

Please keep writing. At this point I don't even care if you dramatically kill them off I just want it to have some sort of conclusion. You left blue and us something to wait for but I'm not too hopeful anymore.

Please finish this well-written story

I've read this eighteen months after the last chapter ended and ask that you please conclude the story. There are just too many loose ends not to be wrapped up. I sincerely hope your not finishing is due to lack of interest and not because of health issues. You write exceptionally well.

Miss your work!!

Ardella, I miss your writing so much! Did you end up publishing The Infiltration? I would love to buy it! Please tell us where to find it!

good beginning

would love to know if you intend to finish this - very liking it so far

Finish story or take it down

Ok so you had a writer's block 3 years ago. Please do all your readers and potential readers a favor and either finish this story or take it down so people don't waste their time reading a half done story.

Leave it up

I reckon it is a good ending to a series, or maybe a sequel series could come after. I like how there aren't any loose ends lying about.

BIT LATE TO ASK BUT I NEED TO KNOW

Please can anyone let me know if infiltration has been published and where. I believe Ardella was planning on publishing. Did this happen.


If not please can you put infiltration back up, it is beyond cruel for you to deprive me (I mean us ) of re-reading that story.