Daughter Ella seems to be attitude challenged; she definitely needs her local college physchology knowledge (??) towhy she must screem at ther father; of course he an ornary ole cuss but he might mind her with gentle negatives (noes)!!
It appears that if Ella's ex-husband had not been in the military, i.e., he would have been home most ofter, her marriage would have lasted much less than the 15 years that it did.
I have a fondest for Ella though, probably a "death-wish" subconscious desire!!
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Anonymous10/12/15
I don't get it
If anyone doesn't like the way this author writes, why keep hitting on him. Go on to something else that'll make you happy or read the stories for what they are and enjoy the fun part. Damn. Not every author on this site is going to write a perfect masterpiece. This man is doing the best he can. No one is going to make everyone happy. I thought this story was a fun read so far. Thanks Momstheboss for writing all these stories.
Warren
English
Did you get a box of commas for Christmas ? Please learn how to use them......
Way too many conventional errors.....
You would benefit from a basic English course. So many grammatical errors it was unreadable. The dialogue was boring too.
wrong word choice
"I was trying to be fateful to my dad" LOL did you mean faithful by any chance?
Dad Was A Kansas Farmer Ch. 02
Daughter Ella seems to be attitude challenged; she definitely needs her local college physchology knowledge (??) towhy she must screem at ther father; of course he an ornary ole cuss but he might mind her with gentle negatives (noes)!!
It appears that if Ella's ex-husband had not been in the military, i.e., he would have been home most ofter, her marriage would have lasted much less than the 15 years that it did.
I have a fondest for Ella though, probably a "death-wish" subconscious desire!!
I don't get it
If anyone doesn't like the way this author writes, why keep hitting on him. Go on to something else that'll make you happy or read the stories for what they are and enjoy the fun part. Damn. Not every author on this site is going to write a perfect masterpiece. This man is doing the best he can. No one is going to make everyone happy. I thought this story was a fun read so far. Thanks Momstheboss for writing all these stories.
Warren
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