All Comments on 'CFNM Alien Encounter'

by sexywriter777

Sort by:
  • 17 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good, but...

could be a little longer, more sex.Try with a chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Bad story

I realize this was a fantasy of yours and all but the story is very lacking. It needs more. Just what little there was to it was pretty disappointing. I could see this going a lot further and being done better. Just keep trying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good story

please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
an enjoyable read

Please continue with chapter 2, I can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I am stupid

What does CFNM mean ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
It make me fall asleep it was that bad.

You realy need to get laid. Don't post something this stupid and poor quality ever again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
dont listen to the haters, man!

friggin awesome. Keep 'em coming!

and if anyone doesent know, its

Clothed

Female

Naked

Mall

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good

I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good

Good story but a little bare. I see you have an orgasm denial fetish, but I wonder how much better the story would be with forced orgasms instead. Each experiment could end in orgasm until the guy is totally spent and having painful orgasms. CFNM is about women being clothed with naked men being used. It is not really about orgasm denial which is S&M. The majority of men are not masochists, so this story is very narrow in the audience that will enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I liked it. It was short but to the point. I love orgasm denial stories and I love how the women walk out leaving the bound man and laughing.

ptebadenptebadenabout 7 years ago
I can't give an opinion. I need to read much more

Later

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fucking garbage

You fucking suck

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too short

You had a great story then you rushed the ending (which didn't fit the tamber of the story). Fail

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Too much pain, not enough pleasure or appreciation. You never said what the 2nd choice was.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
She sat on his face?

He bit a piece of her pussy off. In her rush to get off him, he got loose and killed her. When the next woman came in he killed her. The end to the stupidity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A good start -- too much tease for me though

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You have talent. keep working on it

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous