by sexywriter777
I realize this was a fantasy of yours and all but the story is very lacking. It needs more. Just what little there was to it was pretty disappointing. I could see this going a lot further and being done better. Just keep trying.
Please continue with chapter 2, I can't wait to see what happens next.
You realy need to get laid. Don't post something this stupid and poor quality ever again.
friggin awesome. Keep 'em coming!
and if anyone doesent know, its
Clothed
Female
Naked
Mall
Good story but a little bare. I see you have an orgasm denial fetish, but I wonder how much better the story would be with forced orgasms instead. Each experiment could end in orgasm until the guy is totally spent and having painful orgasms. CFNM is about women being clothed with naked men being used. It is not really about orgasm denial which is S&M. The majority of men are not masochists, so this story is very narrow in the audience that will enjoy it.
I liked it. It was short but to the point. I love orgasm denial stories and I love how the women walk out leaving the bound man and laughing.
You had a great story then you rushed the ending (which didn't fit the tamber of the story). Fail
Too much pain, not enough pleasure or appreciation. You never said what the 2nd choice was.
He bit a piece of her pussy off. In her rush to get off him, he got loose and killed her. When the next woman came in he killed her. The end to the stupidity.