I don't mind a short story but the pace was a tad on the fast side. If you just extended it a bit more I think it would have gone at a better pace. Just my opinion.
Keep in mind I normally read only mom and son stories and I happen to read this one and liked it.
hiya, I found the circumstances to be very believable which is important to me as I read erotica. The conflict was good and the support from the daughter is what gave the Daddy/Daughter tango possibility. More of that would have been awesome. The problem I had, besides the many grammatical errors, was the narrative. It seemed, to me, to be very impersonal and quick. Good story though. Believability is difficult to accomplish in my opinion, especially with an incest story. Nice job. :)
by
Anonymous03/10/13
So romantic
It is such a romantic story, I really loved it, it makes me feel the whole love between these two guys, real love.
by
Anonymous03/18/13
Fantastic!!
Life gave him a compensation for hissuffering, furthermore gave him an extra bonus with her child, and the next children fruit of their love, just lovely story
by
Anonymous01/03/14
Nomm, nomm, nomm; I'm next
We're being fed info that alludes to Dad & Daughter possibly being perfect for each other, and they may be, but we don't know all of the problems that he & mom were having Were we given all of the issues? I do wish them the best.
Would anyone actually desert a daughter who got pregnant when "dating a guy"; it's not like anyone's accusing her of being a slut, or sleeping around! It's known that BC & condoms are not completely 100% effective. Did mom even push for BC? Or did she set her daughter up? Of course she could have it terminated or give it up for adoption. Obviously the boy doesn't want anything to do with it, and most likely can't provide anyway. I've never understood a girl wanting to raise a child that wasn't conceived from & shared with love! Every day you'd be reminded that he didn't love you and that would hurt. How would you explain it to the child later?
How in the hell can MOM be such a back-stabbing Biotch? Has a college degree but has never worked? Then wants to knock hubby for not fitting in, hell she wouldn't have anything without him. Wish that she'd been caught "as the other woman"; based upon her attitude she most likely already is. She should be "outed" to the world, then have to find a job. It'd be so hilarious for her to lose all of her friends since she won't have any money. She's planning to be the other woman to the next door neighbor, to oust the wife "who's most likely a friend"; but she dumps the daughter. Holy Mackerel; what a loser! She needs to attend a neighborhood party; get drunk, get laid and end-up pregnant where no man will own up to it. She's be in the same boat as her daughter, except even worse because she'd have nothing and no support.
Thanks for an enjoyable story;
DKP
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Anonymous01/25/15
I wish I had a wonderful daughter like her!
by
Anonymous06/09/15
I had the same great time at work
This gal worked where I did and she stayed after hours to get OT. I was there also, a lot. We got to know each other. She asked if I could help get her a better job there as she was a pregnant young single mom and no money. I said Maybe. She said her tits were full of milk and very heavy to walk with. I said I would suck them for her and she was grateful. After I sucked the milk out, and played with her tits and nipples for a long time, she offered to suck my cock for my kindness. I told her I needed to orgasm in her hot mouth to truly get off. She said she only did that once with she was in hi school with a boy in the back of a car. She said, sure, that the idea excited her. After the blow job. We fondled and groped and she was HOT. No condom required, she was already knocked up and clean. We fucked like this for weeks and weeks. Yeah, it was fun and she got a better job and I got memories and photos and videos of her sucking my hot hard cock. I need one now, I I will give her call and get some pussy off my young girlfriend with the perfect tits and nipples. Bossman.
English
Awesome
Very well written and realistic.
Should've added some revenge to the story as it is falls short of the mark. 3*
very nice
i enjoyed reading this story
Great story
I found myself aroused immensely while reading it..
Not bad
I don't mind a short story but the pace was a tad on the fast side. If you just extended it a bit more I think it would have gone at a better pace. Just my opinion.
Keep in mind I normally read only mom and son stories and I happen to read this one and liked it.
Got Milk?
hiya, I found the circumstances to be very believable which is important to me as I read erotica. The conflict was good and the support from the daughter is what gave the Daddy/Daughter tango possibility. More of that would have been awesome. The problem I had, besides the many grammatical errors, was the narrative. It seemed, to me, to be very impersonal and quick. Good story though. Believability is difficult to accomplish in my opinion, especially with an incest story. Nice job. :)
So romantic
It is such a romantic story, I really loved it, it makes me feel the whole love between these two guys, real love.
Fantastic!!
Life gave him a compensation for hissuffering, furthermore gave him an extra bonus with her child, and the next children fruit of their love, just lovely story
Nomm, nomm, nomm; I'm next
We're being fed info that alludes to Dad & Daughter possibly being perfect for each other, and they may be, but we don't know all of the problems that he & mom were having Were we given all of the issues? I do wish them the best.
Would anyone actually desert a daughter who got pregnant when "dating a guy"; it's not like anyone's accusing her of being a slut, or sleeping around! It's known that BC & condoms are not completely 100% effective. Did mom even push for BC? Or did she set her daughter up? Of course she could have it terminated or give it up for adoption. Obviously the boy doesn't want anything to do with it, and most likely can't provide anyway. I've never understood a girl wanting to raise a child that wasn't conceived from & shared with love! Every day you'd be reminded that he didn't love you and that would hurt. How would you explain it to the child later?
How in the hell can MOM be such a back-stabbing Biotch? Has a college degree but has never worked? Then wants to knock hubby for not fitting in, hell she wouldn't have anything without him. Wish that she'd been caught "as the other woman"; based upon her attitude she most likely already is. She should be "outed" to the world, then have to find a job. It'd be so hilarious for her to lose all of her friends since she won't have any money. She's planning to be the other woman to the next door neighbor, to oust the wife "who's most likely a friend"; but she dumps the daughter. Holy Mackerel; what a loser! She needs to attend a neighborhood party; get drunk, get laid and end-up pregnant where no man will own up to it. She's be in the same boat as her daughter, except even worse because she'd have nothing and no support.
Thanks for an enjoyable story;
DKP
I wish I had a wonderful daughter like her!
I had the same great time at work
This gal worked where I did and she stayed after hours to get OT. I was there also, a lot. We got to know each other. She asked if I could help get her a better job there as she was a pregnant young single mom and no money. I said Maybe. She said her tits were full of milk and very heavy to walk with. I said I would suck them for her and she was grateful. After I sucked the milk out, and played with her tits and nipples for a long time, she offered to suck my cock for my kindness. I told her I needed to orgasm in her hot mouth to truly get off. She said she only did that once with she was in hi school with a boy in the back of a car. She said, sure, that the idea excited her. After the blow job. We fondled and groped and she was HOT. No condom required, she was already knocked up and clean. We fucked like this for weeks and weeks. Yeah, it was fun and she got a better job and I got memories and photos and videos of her sucking my hot hard cock. I need one now, I I will give her call and get some pussy off my young girlfriend with the perfect tits and nipples. Bossman.
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