Ashley's Dark Awakening Ch. 03

Keep it cumming. Ashleys mom is next.

mom is next

Mom is next with a leash and chain led by Ashley as she swats her ass like a domne!

the team

surely these guys are members of some kind of a team that can use both of these ladies

OMG

OMG! Keep this cumming! This is the best!!! I wanna know where Sandy leads the Black COCK SLUT. How depraved will she become? I can't wait until she embraces the humiliation and degradation of telling her family and truly becomes a PROUD Black COCK SLUT.

ashley domesticated her stuck up racist mom

Ashley gets her mom stripped tied spreadeagled and fucked by her bf and then maked her clean her cunt after bf fucks Ashley.

Breeding the white girl

This is a fantastic story, well written and paced just right. Everyone if they were honest would love to breed a white girl. It's the ultimate ego trip. Most of us cannot live the dream (in my case my wife would kill me!) so reading stuff as good as this will have to suffice :-) Let's have more and see how the pregnant Ashley and then the nursing Ashley gets fucked and used the way I would do if I could. More please.

saintrichard

"Everyone if they were honest would love to breed a white girl. It's the ultimate ego trip."

Why do you say that? I'd really like to know. I'm assuming you're black, because I know a lot of black men think this way, and I'd really like to know why.

I'm a bit surprised that Jayson's three friends didn't find themselves each a white girl. I'm still hoping to read about Ashley's parents and community finding out about her black pregnancy

Continue the story

Wonderfully written, please breed her many times.

On a even better note, turn this Dawn into a BCS too. Thanks!

part 4 soon i hope

i hope you write part 4 soon i wantt o see what happends to Ashley and if her parents and her sister find out she is carrying a black baby.

More!

Ashley will be left preggers. Shame she will feel in front of her younger sister and the racism uttered by theit attractive Mom will be a huge turnoff plus drive Ashley deeper into black submission. College is dead and she will move to the projects with her black stud. Like any good mother, Mom will pay Ashley a visit andnrun into a black sister who hates racist white bitches.

Given a drugged cold drink by Ashley, mom wakes up totally naked draped over a chair tied tight spread open with mouth plugged with a dirty sock. And holding the crop is Ashley who starts cropping ass cheeks as they turn redder upon direction by the black domne. Then she gets ass fucked and the pussy stretched to completely break her down into a more willing servant to black cock and pussy licking. She becomes a red faced submissive totally broken for all time and her mistress tells her to expect this during compulsory visits to Ashley.

Thy younger sister gets into black sexing with 15 yearold budding black studs while visiting Ashley and the two sisters high five when Mom gets multiple orgasms from ass fucking and licking mistress pussy. A racist mom into a totally broken submissive along with two black bred daughters!

plus Ashley's mom becomes a white submissive cleaning lady

The mom is told to strip naked and start scrubbing apartment floor and toilets plus wash all piled up dishes while being cropped by the black domne and alternatively Ashley or younger sister which is a huge turn on for them in disciplining Mom for her racist hypocrisy. This first thing done upon entering the apartment for the compulsory visits.

more!!!

You got a whole graduating class ...lol!

want more

I like them all needed to read more

wow nice made me go out n do it

got sooo turned on i had t try a black boy n it was ace! n now i like ashley -knocked up with a black biys baby in me!

more please

Sandmanbob

When will Chapter 4 be posted? This was awesome....

wow wow

so fucking hot , moe more also
it is so real , black cocks make me howl like that also

Loved it

ch.04 ?
pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaa....................... sssse

Great porn

I like your style and descriptions. Ashley's a slut now. I want to see her be a black man's momma.

Sandy's a BITCH!!!!

I hate people like Sandy!!! Two faced, lying bitches!!! With friends like her, Ashley doesn't need any enemies!!!

The Best of it's Kind

very well written. Easily one of the hottest stories I've read on this site.. Too many stories stop with the white girl getting pregnant. You have gone farther than that and have shown thata black breeding can be really hot!

More..more..more...i wanna read more

OMG! Amazing story...gimme more

Continues to be good

This continues to be a good story. When Ashley finds out how Sandy has betrayed her she should wait until Sandy has has her baby then get her good and drunk while she is ovulating then get her gangbanged by a bunch of blacks as payback.

Sandy is a BFF

I would love to have a friend like Sandy. But in the end I would much rather be Ashley. She's the girl I always wished I could be.

The ending

Once she shows the family finds out when a big black man shows up at the house. The fact that her father didn't shoot him was enough for him to know he could get the whole family. Started coming over and playing with her big milk swollen tits I front of everyone till she had an orgasm in front of them. No matter how embarrassed she was she couldn't seem to stop him. It was only natural that his cock got hard and she took it out and made him cum when he told her to. Her mother tried to not peek but he teased her and made her touch him.

Love this series. Me and the husband have read it and enjoyed it throughly! Hope to see more in the future like this!

Just one word....

Yuk

I want to like it, but it has serious flaws

I suppose it's probably not going to get me any mileage to say that the story is extremely racist. I mean, yes, it is, but it's 'interracial' fetish genre of porn, which is a genre that specifically milks American white antipathy towards and dehumanization of black people (and especially upon the myth of the black man as some kind of subhuman sexually aggressive animal) as the very fuel for its fetish. This gives rise to all sorts of strange ideas (like a strange obsession with a "white womb" being "conquered" by "black seed"), but whatever; the genre is what it is.

While I don't share the interracial fetish on display here, there's actually a lot to like about this story. Ashley and Sandy are really well drawn characters. I like Ashley, she's written well, and I feel bad for her. Sandy is ruining her life, and she's getting off on it, even if I don't like Sandy very much, she's still a compelling and well written character. Probably my only objection to Ashley's characterization is that I think you ramped up to the jargon of the interracial/race play fetish. I think it would be a better approach to show Ashley initially uncomfortable with it, maybe even a little turned off by it (but really, really turned on by how gorgeous Derren is) to give you something to build towards in chapters 2 and 3.

Your normal non-sex scenes are well done; the scene where Ashley is talking with her mother and trying to decide whether to confess, and she knows that if she just lifts her shirt and turns her body ever so slightly, her mom will know she's pregnant is quite effective, and it feels real -- not least because I was in almost the exact same situation two years ago, and had the exact same urge to reveal it to my mom, which would have meant I would not have gone to college, and would have totally derailed everything I have planned for my life. ... not that hiding my pregnancy from my parents and carrying my daughter to term in the freshman dorm didn't almost do that anyways, adoption or no adoption. But there's a real sense of Ashley's entire future hanging in the balance, and the effectiveness of that scene is not an isolated incident. The story has great potential.

The various and completely interchangeable black characters are where this story falls apart, though. They're not people so much as they are sexually insatiable racial stereotypes, and it's really disappointing to see them handled in such a perfunctory manner when Ashley and Sandy and even Ashley's mom are there to demonstrate that you can do much better than this.

Why does Derren really want Ashley pregnant? Give him a reason. A *real* reason. "He's an insatiable black sexual animal!" isn't a reason. It can be YOUR meta-reason as the author, but it can't be his. What does he want out of life? He's a football player, right? Is he also academically gifted? Does he have a bright future ahead of him? Does he expect that Ashley won't hit him with a paternity suit after she gives birth, assuming she actually carries the child to term? Is he worried about the risk of repeated concussions in his sport? Does he have brothers? Sisters? What are his parents like? What's his home life like? Is there some deeper psychological scar beneath his obsessive need to remind Ashley of his blackness and her whiteness almost every time he opens his mouth? His behavior seems almost specifically calculated to be as repulsive as possible, and you never give any sense of who he is beyond "sexually insatiable racial stereotype." And sure, he can be that ALSO, but he can't *just* be that.

Then there's Jayson. What is there to say about him except that he's a black guy who isn't named Derren? That does seem to be only thing distinguishing him from Derren. Come on. You can do better than that; in almost every other story you've written, you've done better than that.

So yeah. There's a lot to like here, but the characterization of its black men just kill any sense of verisimilitude. But if you were to fix that, this story could be *incredible*.

That's right

Good to see another white girl give it up to the Nigga. Hooked from now on.

MORE!!!!!!!!

Please more!

More

Try another category....

Sadly racist. If you were to move away from racial stereotypes and focus on another genre like nonhuman you could explore the animalistic side of sex more sympathetically. You have the inherent creativity to accomplish this.

Disappointed

I was so hoping this would turn into a love story. Very disappointed you choose to go a different route