by manyeyedhydra
Ok I was rather happy to see that there was a tiny bit more plot this time, I would personally like more but that's just me. Also the ending was a major cliffhanger which is always annoying, but if the wait is worth the tease then I'm willing to deal with it.
More plot please?
I have to agree with the anonymous commenter. I like your writing but I love it when you build from story to story. The first couple chapters the 2xx series lacked that. I think it was good to set up the situation for Phil but I am glad you are now developing the story into a story rather than a series of vignettes.
L'mactia is an interesting creature. I do wonder that the much more knowledgeable and clever Succubi did not make sure their 'master' was better protected. Surely they would know something like this would happen after they killed his classmate.
completely awesome as always! Who would know that spider f**ng could be so much fun!
I like that you ended this chapter slightly differently than usual. It's an unconventional way to sentence a man to death-by-succubus (err, quasi-succubus).
However, unlike most of your stories, I had difficulty visualizing what was happening this time, and that took away from some of the eroticism.
This story gives me the urge to start an "Why must you torture us like this?"-rant...
...and that's a good thing.
Seriously, as much as I hate having to wait for the next part, the fact that I know there *will* be a next part more than makes up for it. I may think that the next story should have been out yesterday already so I can continue reading seamlessly, but that's just because I like your stories that much.
So... I can haz next story plz?
I'm getting quite fond of this story for the story aspect as well as the sex scenes. It's becoming an interesting story in its own right
Man im seriously slipping on when you release chapters I gotta check more often. Any way it was an interesting update,4 new characters and one sent to kill Phil,Im pretty sure we know who sent the spider,but I,ll leave that for the next chapter.
Heres hoping Verde or one of the others find him before its too late unless mameka beytan finds him,then he,really screwed.
I love this story so much I really enjoy the chapters , I can't wait to the next come , darn cliffhangers
Now I have to wait another year to find out what happened... thank you very freaking much !
Please do not leave us in the lurch for too long. It was my hope you would continue this story, but he is the hero, right? Heros don't die, they just get assigned new jobs and tasks. If not, who is going to take his place? New characters are nice, especially with there different talents. It would be nice to let this character continue and learn from the experiences. I know, it supposed to be the other guy that gets trapped and terminated, not the favored one... after all this is erotic horror, right? but with a hopefully happier ending... or continuing.
That is the question. It seems that Phil is regressing in his character development and more importantly his memory.
Way back when Cerula took pity on him and started training with him and studying magic and it seemed like something that continued on in the time between scenes.
On thing that stuf out was him reading a fire spell and conjuring it without incantations or gestures. That seemed like something that would be a useful skill when being assasinated by a spider bitch.
I kept expecting him to focus and gut the harlot like he dismissed those fire elementals way back when.
And earlier he made a more proactive use of magic to silence Verde.
I saw how he attempted to resist but wasn't really convinced that he had no options or that he should believe he had no options not after all he's been through.
That rather destroyed immersion with how he seems to progress so slowly.
Amazing Story! Did you post an update to this story? Because at the bottom you say it will be continued. I am really anxious to see more. :)