All Comments on 'Bliss'

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Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
A titillating journey

I am not sure if you intended a consistent rhyme scheme, but if you did you might want to take another look. Enjoyed the content and read. Thanks for sharing.

darkknight01darkknight01about 11 years ago
Erotic Passion

The erotic passion just flows. You can just feel the warm embrace at the end.

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