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by erectus123
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Ashesh9about 11 years agoIf the narrator's Mother was not involved in this poem ; i could have really
Enjoyed tge tasty omlette : but tge poignancy of the maternal desertion restrained tge foodie in me : 5-ed.
twelveooneabout 11 years agogood material
buried, decide what you want to do and then throw out the half that doesn't really add anything, i.e. you are putting in too many asides for the main dish.
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