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Tali Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/02/13

Thank you for more of the journey.

Many times if have heard/read people assert that BDSM is not all about sex and indeed is not about sex at all at its core. This is the best example of that I have ever read. This is entirely about the psychological balance of power. This is the best and truely only category for this story. You are keeping us on edge-feeding us some of now and little bits of before. We are working a puzzle to which you only give us a few pieces at a time. 'Swonderful.

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by Anonymous03/03/13

Very good

Please continue, please write more about what the characters look like (age, blond, height) helps visualize other then that great story, write on...

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by litmoir03/04/13

Thank you for the comments

I've seen several comments asking for more physical descriptions... I want you to know that I'm not ignoring that, but after thinking it over, I think that giving the power of imagination to visualize their fantasy with guidance to the reader is what I prefer. Apologies if that disappoints anyone.

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by kenseys03/30/13

this is GREAT

I frequently check back to see if another chapter is posted.
Hopefully you didn't/won't abandon this! i love it :)

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by Anonymous04/28/13

This is such a well written story on a complex lifestyle. I don't think visual descriptions are needed at all!

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