by twistedfantasies
Enough of the Me and Sonia shit. Just create dialog like most people do. You know... he said, she said.
Fail. Not even voting.
Have a happy life with your cousin. Don't bother coming back. Bye.
This is really good stuff.Please dont bother reading nasty comments here.Every stupid psycho gets jealous of good writers here,you have a wonderful flair of writing and superb build up.Please describe the girls attributes,attire in little more detail,like what she is wearing in the marriage party,her assets etc...superb.please carry on more escapedes of the girl !!
Always enjoy reading your stories and about Indian incest in general. I live in a college town and Indians here are so conservative, so quiet it's very difficult to imagine their having these types of affairs. But much appreciate the 'exposes'.
Its a very lovely story and a good confessional narration of a typical slut caught between her physical attraction and love!
Seemed like it was written by a high school kid that does not have many true life experiences to draw from yet, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere. Sorry but it just didn't seem real or plausible. Good luck on your next story.
that was such a nasty thing to do.. the bitch.. lol... "i'll call you back, he want's to do it again"... fucking hilarious..