All Comments on 'The Bathrobe'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Bathrobe sniffin' Fetish !?! .........that's a new one .....

Dr. Richard von Krafft ebbing would have been definitely interested in this one !!

freakyfreaky469freakyfreaky469about 11 years agoAuthor
Ashesh9-

It's not the bathrobe that's the fetish, it's the man who wears it...

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely done-5

good job! perceptive, emotional, passionate--smells can produce erotic feelings even years after when a similar odor reminds of a long forgotten event

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

I liked the parenthetical self-talk. Although, if recited, one wouldn't imagine them differently than the other lines, I found myself imagining (poems are supposed to do that right?) those in parentheses to be what the poet said out loud and the others what she (or he) thought. That simple difference is what got me thinking and imagining.

weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
This man...

You made me want to smell mystery man! What is it about a mans scent that is so entoxicating? My favorite... Old spice, sweat, arosal. Of fuck... Yummy!!!

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