All Comments on 'Lacie Ch. 05'

I' can't wait to see what happens

i love this story. im excited to see what happens next.

I do hope she has his baby, but although I love all the girls, I hope Lacey is extra special to him. The most special of all. I want her to have his babies.

Sorry - I'm done - five chapters is enough. This is NOT a story, it's a series of descriptions; of conversations, of rooms, of people, of just stuff. There appears to be no plot, no purpose, no direction...there's no there there.