Story was okay, but the dialogue was just broken. "flapping your goddamn uppity lips"? Ummm, yeah.
Can u please make another part to your holiday blackmail story.
I also tend to talk too much, sometimes that can get us into trouble.... And sometimes "trouble" is what keeps life interesting. Haters will hate. I look forward to the next chapter.
Great story. I look forawrd to reading more, bet she dosent keep talking so much anymore.
I know its not about to win me a pulitzer prize, but whats so wrong with the dialogue? Maybe people you know have limited vocabularies? I'm always astounded how people with critiques never leave their name so you can ask them for clarification.
Hello from a fellow Canadian (Ontario, to be precise). I enjoy your stories immensely and appreciate the induction of each scene, each character, and the intended action each of them takes.
I do have one request. Would you consider doing another audio story? Your last one is what initially brought me to favourite you as an author. Your voice, your literary lust, your delicious pronunciation... just perfect.
Non-consent/Reluctance certainly isn't at the top of my preferred categories, but I can't resist reading any new Lucia story. Always a treat, luv.
I want to thank you again for using my idea Lucia, it's a real honor to read about fucking that hot mouth of yours ;)
Thanks, Lucia, for another great story! In this genre you are the best!
Another fine tale my dear. Sorry for the delay in reading it, life cropped up. On to part two now. Keep writing and I will continue being your favorite fan. I hope one day you will write for me. Until then I remain...
Hello again to Canada's finest fellatrix. How are you my dear? I miss trading BJ vignettes with you. Last time we left off, your talented pianist was paying for her cross country ride with her talented mouth. The big time music producer was starting to enjoy her submissiveness and willingness to improve her throat fucking skills. There might have even been a life changing audition waiting for her in Vegas. Mick was on the phone. Kneel down and email me darling. Don't keep a good man waiting.
This story sounds more real than fiction. If it is , you truly like what you do. Please write some more.
Your story made my maggot twitch.
Don't get hung up about what others say
about your use of language. Go with what
feels good to you and fuck 'em all.
Have written a similar story to yours, read and
see what you think about it.
Have got other stories in the pipeline.
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