by JonB1969
I like what you wrote on this. It's got potential to be a longer, more involved story. I'd like to see more. Thanks for sharing.
Enjoyed this a lot, very realistic dialogue which is always a plus for me 😊
I would have liked it even more if you hadn't felt compelled to insert lyrics from the song into the dialog, verbatim. Even so, gave it a five, and think the characters and premise have longer story potential.
I like that it is told from a male point of view of an interracial relationship, and it seemed realistic, while also being arousing. Great story!
Love how this is from a males perspective, hope they become a stronger unit before having a child. Very good read.
White mans semen huh, not bad.
Good story. very different from my usual read. I liked it. but then again, I like happy endings. Both kinds. 5 stars, the Bear is content.
The BEAR