All Comments on 'I'm Not Going'

by JonB1969

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brittybeebrittybeeabout 11 years ago
Hm.

Not bad at all.

Please continue!:)

OverstarOverstarabout 11 years ago
Potential for more

I like what you wrote on this. It's got potential to be a longer, more involved story. I'd like to see more. Thanks for sharing.

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101about 11 years ago
Good job!

Enjoyed this a lot, very realistic dialogue which is always a plus for me 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I liked it, but...

I would have liked it even more if you hadn't felt compelled to insert lyrics from the song into the dialog, verbatim. Even so, gave it a five, and think the characters and premise have longer story potential.

HoldingStacieDownHoldingStacieDownabout 11 years ago

I really liked this story a lot . I hope there will be more .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a guy's perspective

I like that it is told from a male point of view of an interracial relationship, and it seemed realistic, while also being arousing. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I like where this is going. You should write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

cute couple keep going! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
very good

Love how this is from a males perspective, hope they become a stronger unit before having a child. Very good read.

White mans semen huh, not bad.

LT56linebackerLT56linebacker3 months ago

Good story. very different from my usual read. I liked it. but then again, I like happy endings. Both kinds. 5 stars, the Bear is content.

The BEAR

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