All Comments on 'San Juan Bautista'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
this one better

why line breaks, what is the reason? not bad ending

question what you are doing (I am talking writing, here)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Beautiful writing. Thank you for sharing.

luigithicketluigithicketabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks...

for all your comments, suggestions, views, and hearts. These three poems were all written in the space of a few months half a lifetime ago. Unfortunately the nightmares were real and I'm just now starting to accept them. I look forward to writing and sharing more...

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