homeNon-Erotic PoetrySan Juan BautistaPublic Comments

All Comments  for

San Juan Bautista

byluigithicket©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by twelveoone03/02/13

this one better

why line breaks, what is the reason? not bad ending
question what you are doing (I am talking writing, here)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/02/13

Beautiful writing. Thank you for sharing.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by luigithicket03/04/13

Thanks...

for all your comments, suggestions, views, and hearts. These three poems were all written in the space of a few months half a lifetime ago. Unfortunately the nightmares were real and I'm just now starting to accept them. I look forward to writing and sharing more...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to San Juan Bautista  or
More submissions by luigithicket.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel