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Uurf Ch. 05B

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by Anonymous

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by bierce03/09/13

Interesting take on the story

Two tales. Both are good. Will you continue this or eliminate one?

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by Anonymous03/10/13

Now you're going to make him master of the pot whore?

I was going to give this story a chance to turn things around, but like the comment on the previous chapter says, this wizard has lost his original values and become corrupt. I don't really wish to read this any further. This may be your intention, and so good luck with your new direction. Perhaps it will attract a different type of audience.

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by hakdrakken03/13/13

Brick wall!

Somehow it wouldn't surprise me if this was the end of the story.

Don't. You. Dare. :-)

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by Anonymous11/27/13

The End?

Are you just gonna leave it like this? What's going on?

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