A cliff hanger ending that leaves you with the scent of more to come!
SJP, you have to have one of the most vivid imaginations and ability to put these visions into words. As I sit in my office typing this, I find myself watching the neighbor lady going out for her mail and wondering what she looks like sans the winter wear and why does she always seem to look at my windows just before going back into the porch and then taking time to bend over and straighten the throw rug before locking the glass storm door. This series has more surprises than a box of Cracker Jack and of course the prize is the fact that we always get some more story! Somewhere, somehow I get the feeling that Susan and Liz will connect and limp dicked William gets to really be the voyeur. I also suspect that Bosco has a role somewhere along the way! (BTW-nice way to appeal to your older readers, who will be the only ones to remember the jars and little pumps to add the Bosco syrup to ones' milk !). My deep perception also sees in it's crystal ball a group scene with the moving men and it could even bring some golden shower fun. I know that our talented author will have something to pull out of her sleeve to entice us :) You have made me smile today Susan and after 3+ days of snow, that is warming - or maybe it's just the heater at my feet :) Just kidding, your talent is tremendous, so many of the stories here have to be so graphic and gross and that leaves little to like other than maybe a happy ending for some. Looking forward to another installment :)
You got 5 more stars. I thought about giving it 1 star for saying that a 60 year old man is elderly, but I realized that was William's opinion of himself, not Susan's. If he thinks of himself as elderly, then he probably is. I hope we get some in sight into Liz soon. I imagine her story does not match William's monologue. I am not surprised at the neighbor's name, you do that often. Unashamed self promotion, I find it amusing. It must drive the SJP bashers into a frenzy. Looking forward to next chapter when you get the chance. Until then I will continue to read some of your older stuff under prior pseudonyms. To other readers, I recommend Susan's "Love So Young" series on Amazon. Good stories and not expensive. Great way to support your favorite author.
Such a clever young woman you are Susan; love watching you unfold little slivers of your brilliant mind. Thanks for keeping us in anticipation of your next twist!
My neighbor looks like a gargoyle, and has a matching disposition. I love the way you build a story,and am amazed that you can keep five and six of them going at the same time. You got another well deserved five.
This story is doing a great job of feeding my most erotic fantasies.
A fantasy of Bill and Susan and in that fantasy I'm already well ahead of the story as told so far.
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SUSAN: YOU ARE my No 1 writer keep on writing
A cliff hanger ending that leaves you with the scent of more to come!
SJP, you have to have one of the most vivid imaginations and ability to put these visions into words. As I sit in my office typing this, I find myself watching the neighbor lady going out for her mail and wondering what she looks like sans the winter wear and why does she always seem to look at my windows just before going back into the porch and then taking time to bend over and straighten the throw rug before locking the glass storm door. This series has more surprises than a box of Cracker Jack and of course the prize is the fact that we always get some more story! Somewhere, somehow I get the feeling that Susan and Liz will connect and limp dicked William gets to really be the voyeur. I also suspect that Bosco has a role somewhere along the way! (BTW-nice way to appeal to your older readers, who will be the only ones to remember the jars and little pumps to add the Bosco syrup to ones' milk !). My deep perception also sees in it's crystal ball a group scene with the moving men and it could even bring some golden shower fun. I know that our talented author will have something to pull out of her sleeve to entice us :) You have made me smile today Susan and after 3+ days of snow, that is warming - or maybe it's just the heater at my feet :) Just kidding, your talent is tremendous, so many of the stories here have to be so graphic and gross and that leaves little to like other than maybe a happy ending for some. Looking forward to another installment :)
Another great chapter
You got 5 more stars. I thought about giving it 1 star for saying that a 60 year old man is elderly, but I realized that was William's opinion of himself, not Susan's. If he thinks of himself as elderly, then he probably is. I hope we get some in sight into Liz soon. I imagine her story does not match William's monologue. I am not surprised at the neighbor's name, you do that often. Unashamed self promotion, I find it amusing. It must drive the SJP bashers into a frenzy. Looking forward to next chapter when you get the chance. Until then I will continue to read some of your older stuff under prior pseudonyms. To other readers, I recommend Susan's "Love So Young" series on Amazon. Good stories and not expensive. Great way to support your favorite author.
You Keep Us Cuming Back
Such a clever young woman you are Susan; love watching you unfold little slivers of your brilliant mind. Thanks for keeping us in anticipation of your next twist!
Some guys have all the luck.
My neighbor looks like a gargoyle, and has a matching disposition. I love the way you build a story,and am amazed that you can keep five and six of them going at the same time. You got another well deserved five.
My fantasy continues
This story is doing a great job of feeding my most erotic fantasies.
A fantasy of Bill and Susan and in that fantasy I'm already well ahead of the story as told so far.
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