All Comments on 'A Higher Level of Caca'

by HarryHill

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ScrubberScrubberabout 11 years ago
Buzzzzzzzzz

I like this poem. It amuses me.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Spalt

5ed of course

very good, do you know, Harry you managed to avoid the one word -he'll show up though, just as avoids owning up his purgative dumps

anyway this says and does exactly what you want, funny too

anyway Arsetunnel left one on mine AFTER I was gone for 6 months accusing me of being the anon

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Harry , no matter how many of these cowards criticize you ---

there are those like me who sincerely like & appreciate your poems !! Ignore those scum & live in our love , bro !

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
well said, great title

5d, a hot burning jewel of a deposit!

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks folks

rhythm is still off in places

ArjayEiffArjayEiffabout 11 years ago
wicked

It may need a little tightening in places, a few read alouds will fix that. It is still a 5er.

TsothaTsothaalmost 10 years ago

I am surprised to see the word "caca" here, it makes me wonder its origin.

Anyway, funny gift you've left here, Harry. I could stop myself from smiling, reading it. And I like the rhymes, too! Whenever someone makes a rhyming poem and I like it, something is going on. Stanza 2 is gold.

Many strange things happen behind the bushes of Lit, it seems, not all of it squatting, evidenced with your poem, here.

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