All Comments on 'Ice and Iron Skies'

#4 on my list of didn't want to see, as subject matter

this line:

Unresponsive traitorous legs

while being something to watch out for on the normal course of writing, fits exactly the material

wise to cut off Another...at 5. usually 3, but fits the material

Soulless howling winds

Stealing away what heat

consider condensing to

Stealing howling winds

forget heat, it's not there anyway

You may want to read Shackleton's book, if you haven't done so, best done when it warms up.

This one also exisits on two levels... Iron skies? where have I seen that before?

Should I really analyse this poem before reading Helping Mickey ? Or are they independent of each other ?