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Lustful Lyrics Ch. 09

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by Anonymous03/06/13

Well done

I hope that more of this will be coming.

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by LaRascasse03/09/13

Nice story

It was short and sweet (and obviously hot!). I liked the rustic feel to it. There goes another from your Survivor's list ;)

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by JJMemaw062301/12/17

I just have to say this, I hate the way this is ending! I don't mind some BDMS but I actually hate this. You are an excellent storyteller and I love most of your other works, but not this one. A good Dom/sub relationship is about trust and I don't condone violence for Any relationship. Keep writing!!

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