Loved earlier chapters, characters seemed real and plot was decent til you included mom and dad, as others have said already, blah... major turn off, and even if you felt the need to add the whole swingers thing, did you "really" have to do so the same fucking NIGHT she lost her virginity with her brother? Her father has had mom for years, the brother's romance with Lilly was only just starting and dad is already trying to get in on the action with her. I mean shit, give them some damn time alone with each other for a few years before pulling this crap, give them some space. It's like the whole time after they got caught they barely had a minute to themselves without getting crowded by one or both parents, no time to talk about their relationship between each other and their futures etc without the parents butting in. Very, very annoying chapter to read, rest are a solid 4 star but this would be lucky to reach 2 from me. Would've been much better had you kept it bro / sis and made Lilly a loving, slut-type only for brother from now on, only sucking other cocks for her sorority but never fucking anyone but her brother. The parents knowing and approving of the relationship would've been fine but things got out of hand. It also seemed like their personalities were undermined by you during the last half of the chapter which was pathetic.
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Good story ruined by shitty chapter
Loved earlier chapters, characters seemed real and plot was decent til you included mom and dad, as others have said already, blah... major turn off, and even if you felt the need to add the whole swingers thing, did you "really" have to do so the same fucking NIGHT she lost her virginity with her brother? Her father has had mom for years, the brother's romance with Lilly was only just starting and dad is already trying to get in on the action with her. I mean shit, give them some damn time alone with each other for a few years before pulling this crap, give them some space. It's like the whole time after they got caught they barely had a minute to themselves without getting crowded by one or both parents, no time to talk about their relationship between each other and their futures etc without the parents butting in. Very, very annoying chapter to read, rest are a solid 4 star but this would be lucky to reach 2 from me. Would've been much better had you kept it bro / sis and made Lilly a loving, slut-type only for brother from now on, only sucking other cocks for her sorority but never fucking anyone but her brother. The parents knowing and approving of the relationship would've been fine but things got out of hand. It also seemed like their personalities were undermined by you during the last half of the chapter which was pathetic.
SEQUEL?
So... Where's book 2 chapter one?
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