All Comments on 'Business and Pleasure'

by Big Gunz

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow what a start

A great start to the story - what next for Chrissy ?

DiannahDiannahabout 11 years ago
4 stars

Very well done! You are clearly a talented writer, creating vivid pictures with words. I have to point out one line that was just perfect:

"Chrissy turned and looked back at him, her hair strewn across her face, but her eyes staring through her curls and into his."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
And ...

... the slut just made $5 million in damages for sexual assault and rape. Coerced consent is no consent in the eyes of the law. Way to go Steven! Not only do you lose your job and your house and pension to the slut, but your soon-to-be ex-wife will clean you out of whatever else you have left. Enjoy sleeping under bridges, idiot!

God, I wish some "manager" would try that with my wife -- I'd be on easy street for the rest of my life!

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