Cute and quirky...... nice one
I enjoyed this. Even though Cheryl enjoyed it it served her right for dating him because she thought he was rich. This is a good short story.
It isn't often that one can predict the exact course and outcome of a story from its very beginning. No plot and mediocre stroke = two stars
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CUTE
Cute and quirky...... nice one
Greedy Bitch
I enjoyed this. Even though Cheryl enjoyed it it served her right for dating him because she thought he was rich. This is a good short story.
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It isn't often that one can predict the exact course and outcome of a story from its very beginning. No plot and mediocre stroke = two stars
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