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Happy for Collin
I'm glad that Nico went after Collin and that Collin had the sense to realize where his true happiness lay.
Happy for Carolyn
showing up. She will give some interest to the plot.
Nico Wins
Sr71plt; this series has kept me entranced, angry, fed up, and totally p iss ed off at Nico through out different chapters. But the ends of the chapters always seemed to blend well into the beginnings of the next chapters. And the story had a feel of a (trying to figure out the right description words) river of feeling and descriptive words to help each chapter flow into the next chapter. To be honest and not mean, this last chapter felt like that flowing river hit a boulder filled rapids. It just seemed like it jumped all over the place and then broke into pieces at the end. Hopefully, these words can help you in the future. I still liked the series very much, and can't wait to read your future writings.
Great ending, great story.
Sad to see the end, but so good to see Collin finally go for what will really fulfil him. And so lucky for him to have met a man who is complex and successful and shares and understands his art and needs.
You have created complexly human men and tossed them about until they fall into what for me is a very satisfying conclusion.
Some of your best.
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