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a psalm for a silicon stone age

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/05/13

Haunting imagery, raw, powerfully moving.. Thank you for sharing.

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by twelveoone03/05/13

oh jesus

2nd and last stanzas blow me away
this dips a little, a little
cacophany of crows
saccharin saintly sentimentality
this
star-awed old roses; (blows me away) though
I wonder if it would sound better as "Your star-awed old rose"
Three things I like, you got to the end before I did, you got me to the end..
and damn, there must have at least 5 things I wished I wrote.

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by HarryHill03/05/13

Lost my comment in a thunder storm, Sean

Twelve Oh did a much better job than I. 5, You have to ask?

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