she probably thinks he was going to put her thru thier shit for some kind of proof of misconduct or something.
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Anonymous03/08/13
The sudden turn was awesome
Now, I'm on pins and needles. I just discovered this story today, but I really like it. Now I want to know what they want her to do. They have just spent a month getting her to believe he will never hurt her, but now this seems sinister. I am curious. Can't wait for the next chapter. Still love Master and want Lacey to have hs babies.
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Anonymous03/08/13
Keep writing those wonderful chapters of yours
Even though your story is set in a future fantastic world ,I simply can't find believable the absence of natural female jealousy among your girls, espesialy while they are sharing a man they all love so passionatly, It feels so unatural. But again if your a male writer ,it's only natural lol. Otherwise I like your story very much and can't wait to see your 'Amazons' burning down the bad guys. I also can' wait to see what the girls cryptical giggles regarding Lasie and master in one of the previous chapters is finally all about.
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she probably thinks he was going to put her thru thier shit for some kind of proof of misconduct or something.
The sudden turn was awesome
Now, I'm on pins and needles. I just discovered this story today, but I really like it. Now I want to know what they want her to do. They have just spent a month getting her to believe he will never hurt her, but now this seems sinister. I am curious. Can't wait for the next chapter. Still love Master and want Lacey to have hs babies.
Keep writing those wonderful chapters of yours
Even though your story is set in a future fantastic world ,I simply can't find believable the absence of natural female jealousy among your girls, espesialy while they are sharing a man they all love so passionatly, It feels so unatural. But again if your a male writer ,it's only natural lol. Otherwise I like your story very much and can't wait to see your 'Amazons' burning down the bad guys. I also can' wait to see what the girls cryptical giggles regarding Lasie and master in one of the previous chapters is finally all about.
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