So good to have more of your writing. Absolutely wonderful beginning. Thank You
You will probably get some heat about the hanging portion, but I look forward to the next chapter!
I was very careful to ensure it's seen as a fantasy; no-one gets noosed and we hope it won't offend anyone! This will be a gentle tale of female control and an exciting education for the lucky young man; more to come shortly.
Can't wait to hear the rest!
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Excellent
So good to have more of your writing.
Absolutely wonderful beginning.
Thank You
More coming I hope
You will probably get some heat about the hanging portion, but I look forward to the next chapter!
Hanging...
I was very careful to ensure it's seen as a fantasy; no-one gets noosed and we hope it won't offend anyone!
This will be a gentle tale of female control and an exciting education for the lucky young man; more to come shortly.
Can't wait to hear the rest!
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