All Comments on 'The distance between us'

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lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago

I like this, but it seems too...unrealistic. Life isn't really like this, life is gritty and rough.

Butterflies512Butterflies512about 11 years ago
I really like this stanza

Silence created

with loving intention

serves well the purpose

to give us dimension

It really speaks to something inside me. I'll be interested in seeing more of your work.

weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
Give a voice

You lend a voice to the silence... Beautiful!

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