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The distance between us

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by Anonymous

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by lonelyhousewife3203/05/13

I like this, but it seems too...unrealistic. Life isn't really like this, life is gritty and rough.

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by Butterflies51203/05/13

I really like this stanza

Silence created
with loving intention
serves well the purpose
to give us dimension

It really speaks to something inside me. I'll be interested in seeing more of your work.

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by weepingangel8803/22/13

Give a voice

You lend a voice to the silence... Beautiful!

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