New Groom

Same old

I love that you are such a capable and prolific writer, but you're starting to read like a one-trick pony.

All of your women have the same reaction: they are irritated more than anything else by their rape, and eventually decide to just go along with and enjoy it. None of them are terrified, or panic, or truly try to fight back.

It would be nice to see you mix it up a little.

Lovely

I adore these old fashioned scenes. I have pictured myself in a long 1700s gown, complete with petticoats and bonnet, tied, ravished, forced by the man of the moment. Back in those days perhaps men knew what they wanted and had no reservations about helping themselves.
Olivia

Probably the most ridiculous conversation I've ever seen in a rape scene ever. "I'm just checking for broken ribs." Then he acts like he was punishing her after she gets into it? Hello, consistency? Neither of these characters make any sense.