All Comments on 'Magic, Mind Control, & Tentacles'

Decent tentacle rape story, though writing it in present tense threw me off a bit. Curious as to why a witch would have a mundane job in the first place and also why she wouldn't have some sort of dispel spell available. Interested to know if you'll continue this goven the sequel hook.

I liked the mixture of magic and tentacle stuff, it's not something I often see. Keep up the great work!

I really liked it. The double gives it a nice twist. But I do have to wonder if the tentacle thing is an alien, a demon or something in between. Stll, I really like it and it definitely deserves a sequel.

That was loads of wriggly fun. I do love a story where the victim creates their own mishap.

Please tell me you will continue this amazing piece of work?

Great start, this is the first tenticle story I have read. Only critisism i would have is i would like a little more detail during sex. Are there any other tenticle stories you would recommend?

Fairly interesting, though the meta part threw me. Looking forward to seeing if this goes anywhere!

wow... continu this pls i luv it so much such a gud stori rilly nise stori so sexy

It's very sexy indeed. I hope that you make more in this series. It practically makes you a part of the characters!

This story is really good as far as tentacle stories go. Looking forward to the next chapter

love it. Chapter 2???