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Magic, Mind Control, & Tentacles

byFeliciaValentine©
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by penthesword03/08/13

Decent tentacle rape story, though writing it in present tense threw me off a bit. Curious as to why a witch would have a mundane job in the first place and also why she wouldn't have some sort of dispel spell available. Interested to know if you'll continue this goven the sequel hook.

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by Kingmaker71103/09/13

Really good

I liked the mixture of magic and tentacle stuff, it's not something I often see. Keep up the great work!

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by Shadow_Incubus03/10/13

amazing

I really liked it. The double gives it a nice twist. But I do have to wonder if the tentacle thing is an alien, a demon or something in between. Stll, I really like it and it definitely deserves a sequel.

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by stephenchapman03/13/13

That was loads of wriggly fun. I do love a story where the victim creates their own mishap.

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by Anonymous03/14/13

Sequel?

Please tell me you will continue this amazing piece of work?

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by benhur8203/15/13

Good start.

Great start, this is the first tenticle story I have read. Only critisism i would have is i would like a little more detail during sex. Are there any other tenticle stories you would recommend?

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by GigglingGoblin12/20/13

Fairly interesting, though the meta part threw me. Looking forward to seeing if this goes anywhere!

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by Anonymous08/12/14

mmm

wow... continu this pls i luv it so much such a gud stori rilly nise stori so sexy

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by Anonymous08/19/14

It's very sexy indeed. I hope that you make more in this series. It practically makes you a part of the characters!

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