All Comments on 'Nymph'

by NzWiccan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It....

Needs several sequels.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 11 years ago
The best!

The most exquisitely written piece I've ever read. Not one word too many and not one word missing. Beautiful. Thank you.

BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Wow

That needs at least 10 sequels . That was on fire

jpb531jpb531about 11 years ago
Smokin'

Would not complain about more! :-)

EnglishvoyeurEnglishvoyeurabout 11 years ago
superb

Thanks for the story. That was one of the best written, exquisitely paced and nicely erotic. I look forward to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
your words...

like sticky sweet ambrosia sliding down my tongue. you have a gift with words. this story deserves further treatment....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I can't describe what I am feeling for this, it was that amazing. You, my dear, have a gift with words. Keep on writing.

janny54janny54about 11 years ago
more please...

that was absolutely delicious. magical, mystical and so sensual and erotic. only the beginning, I hope. very well written and creative. looking forward to more of this wonderful story. thank you for sharing your gift.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hi NzWiccan, _____ Interesting !

I'm expecting the story to go right, but you go left into a whimsical dream realm..

Lesbian _ Penelope.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Unfinished

I am sorry to say this but your ending sucks if this is truly where you end the story as you leave it wide open for more. It would be nice if you were to add more to this story.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
Scorching story

Ah (wo)man, this is one hot story. This is the stuff dreams or at least, fantasies are made of: making out with an exotic beauty that make your eyes weep and your mouth drool. The ending took a bit of a mythological turn but I'm ok with that. It's worth the read

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 5 years ago

Wow! I am utterly spent & speechless. You write beautifully. Such a gift. Thank you.

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Hey... well I am on here because I love to read the stories that are written here. I'm trying to write a little myself now and I've gotten some nice comments so thanks to you people :-) Though some of you think all of these I wrote for myself, that is not the case, and some o...