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Summer Heat

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by Anonymous

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by irishkenny197403/12/13

Short and hot

Other than a few minor editing issues, well done!

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by Erotonaut03/12/13

Quite nicely done, but giving the characters actual names would both have grounded them more in reality and avoided the constant "he" and "she" references.

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by WishFull03/25/13

Excellent!

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