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Bag Lady & the Retired Marine Ch. 11

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by Sidney4303/09/13

Just caught up, as somehow I missed a couple of chapters. Lots of people with baggage in this story, but kind of a fun read never the less.

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by stuwatcher5203/09/13

Pleased again, but thirsty for more and more and more....

Susan Jill Parker has we readers entrapped with intrigue, suspense, romance and mystery. TOTALLY SURPRISED by the path this episode took and don't want to say too much as not to spoil the plot line for the other readers. I have to think there is a mysterious story coming with the connection between the two main characters that will again leave us desiring more and more. A definite 'erotic writing' from one of the best authors on this site. Five star rating again, my friend :) The Bird

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by nadaliw03/10/13

Great chapter!

You would think the two thugs would've learned their lesson and left the area but they are about to start a war with the wrong bunch of retired marines.

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by gperry284303/10/13

I can't understand what other readers are thinking.

How can someone be a Bag Lady without baggage? Looking forward to future chapters. A devoted follower.

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by chytown03/12/13

Good Chapter****

Thanks for sharing.

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by mdalijinnah06/19/13

good relief in stressed lives

It would be nice if they had real love & passionate sex as a nice relief for there stress filled lives.

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by rightbank07/16/15

You are just messing with us now SJP

Just as we start to become comfortable with the domesticity of our happy almost couple you throw in Anthony and Marquis. Would I be out of place to guess they are the "associates" left in place after the demise of Tyrone?

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