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mouse slaps trap, gets cheez pleez

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by HarryHill03/08/13

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by erectus12303/08/13

nice title

sort of a "high" content, what are you tok'en? nice to see you link to Lennon who has become more symbolic in death than he was in life, who knows what/where he would be/become if he had lived? but your poem might also link to Chong of Cheech. nice abstract word play included, I like it as it expands meanings, often however it goes from meaning to nothingness if you dig?

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