All Comments on 'A Very Modern Family Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

yes yes yes !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I hope Alex will join to this group.... very soon! :)

SapphicRobotSapphicRobotabout 11 years ago
Strap-Ons and Anal

Great story, really hope next chapter is longer/more detailed, and involves some strap-ons and anal

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Agreed

I agree with Sapphic Robot. Please longer and more detail. Maybe just Haley and Claire and then Gloria all in one chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
:)

OMG this is so good! Add Alex maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
really hot

The story is hot but the orgasms have to have more details. Overall a good story keep writing and start writing on other sitcoms such as the big bang theory and how I met your mother you are a really good writer just add more details

johnsmithdragonjohnsmithdragonalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

I've just submitted a new story (to be approved soon). I hope you guys enjoy it. I'll definitely take in your feedback for the following chapter (Chapter 4), which will probably be the last in this series.

I appreciate any feedback given!

imready2imready2almost 10 years ago
Liked it

I think Haley's breasts are actually larger than her Mom's on the show but it is your story LOL. I liked this one too but am REALLY looking forward to the seduction of Gloria. Love bi-girls seducing straight MILFS. Very arousing thought!

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